new narrative idea

i changed how i'd be presenting my narrative pretty much right after i posted about it. i'm going to either take out or reshoot the sections where the setting noticeably bounces around. i shot about 50 clips so far with the same story. i'm splittng them up for about 1/3 a second shown, 1/2 second missing, 1/3 shown, 1/2 sec missing. so it looks a little like images, but it's video.

i might change the lengths. i'm not sure about transitions. i'll probably change the order. i wasn't sure how long to leave the single still image shown for- that's why it's still at 5 seconds. and a whole bunch of other stuff that indicates this is an EXTREMELY rough draft of any idea.